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The Personality of a Class:
Assessing Classroom Dynamics

by Regina Masiello

"Teachers often refer to the "mood" or "feeling" in their classrooms, and as a new teacher I desired a thorough understanding of this often-mentioned but rarely-analyzed phenomenon: What gives a class a distinct personality?" The start of the fall semester marked the beginning of my career as a teacher, and I was pleased, and a bit thankful I suppose, when I met my first group of students. They were interested in the way the class was going to work, the rules they needed to be aware of, and once we started discussing the assigned texts in class, they proved to be talkative. Unlike so many of my colleagues, I did not struggle to inspire conversation in my classroom. Instead, my students willingly entered into the class's group work format and they seemed to thrive there. By the third week of class all of my students had memorized one another's names, and would refer to statements made by their classmates as they answered assigned discussion questions or raised questions of their own.

Approximately one month into the semester I was asked to take another group of students who were suddenly without a teacher; naively I expected this class to behave as my first had. I expected visible and audible indications that they were interested in their work, talkative and involved. However, unlike my first group of students, this second class rarely asked questions, did not learn one another's names regardless of my requests, and generally seemed bored by logistical and regulatory policies.1 Tardiness, never a problem in my first class, was epidemic in my second class. In short, I found myself faced with a larger challenge than I had expected. I was not worried by the quantifiable increase in my workload, or by the demands this new section of Expository Writing would make on my time. Instead, I was concerned by a seemingly intangible impression, a sense that my classes had very different personalities.

Teachers often refer to the "mood" or "feeling" in their classrooms, and as a new teacher I desired a thorough understanding of this often-mentioned but rarely-analyzed phenomenon: What gives a class a distinct personality? How does one get a sense of a class's personality? And, most importantly, how does one explain or discuss so seemingly intangible a subject as the personality of an entire group of people? The following pages chart my attempt to discuss the personality of a class and, ultimately, to question a teacher's ability to know or perceive that personality.

After a few weeks of teaching both sections of Expository Writing, using the same readings, discussion questions, and assignments, I realized that the seeming lack of interest in my second class could no longer be understood as an "adjustment" period. It was true that my second group had lost their original teacher, and that, according to my students' accounts, their first teacher had shown them little respect. My students explained that their first instructor had often arrived late to class, had been unprepared to lead class meetings, and had often, without prior notice, missed class entirely. But after only one week of meetings, my students realized I was not like their first instructor, and the group perceived my unflinching commitment to teaching. In short, I believed, based on my students' passing comments, that they had left their semester's unfortunate start behind. The differences between my two sections seemed to go beyond the purely logistical circumstances at the beginning of the semester, and I quickly set about trying to understand the disparity.
 
The Tale of Two Classes Probably in an attempt to avoid the seemingly intangible qualities at the heart of my concerns, I turned first to what seemed highly quantifiable: statistical and demographic information. I teach for a large university which is divided into smaller colleges based on disciplinary focus and admittance standards. While most of the students in my first class attended the humanities college, my second class was comprised of students from science-oriented schools. Considering the implied demographics of the two classes, I formed two theories in an attempt to explain the difference in classroom dynamics.

First, I conjectured, the difference in classroom dynamics may be attributed to a simple matter of interest. The students in my first class attended the humanities-oriented school, and probably had a prior interest in reading and writing. Their eagerness and engagement in my classroom could be a reflection of the fact that the focus of the class complemented my students' general interest in humanities-based work. My second class, on the other hand, seemed generally set on a scientific path, and rather than being interested in writing, they were enthralled by their Biology classes and reserved their enthusiasm for those courses.

Perhaps, looking at disciplinary segregation from a more cynical angle, the difference in my classes had little to do with genuine interest at all, and was rather a reflection of the fact that "current academic disciplines and departments were created more than a century ago" and that in general "formal education has been carefully designed to keep everything separate from everything else" (Miller and Spellmeyer I2, I4). The students in my second class, who were largely studying sciences, may have been conditioned, from years of experience in our schools, to see writing as an unnecessary diversion from more apparently relevant classes, like Biology and Chemistry. My first class, however, largely set on a path of humanities-oriented study, had been taught to believe that my class was within the realm of their studies, and that writing was a valid part of their overall program. Whether I based my theories on the optimistic belief that my students harbored genuine enthusiasm for their subjects, or on the pessimistic belief that my students had been conditioned to isolate each discipline from the others, I felt it possible that disciplinary "loyalty" or interest played a part in classroom dynamics. My theory seemed more and more plausible each time I heard students from my first class complain about their Biology classes and science-related requirements, or when students in my second class bemoaned the "uselessness" of writing papers. To my first class, science courses were a diversion, and, to my second class, writing was a distraction. This seemed to explain, at least in part, the differences in attitude I experienced in the classrooms.

My second theory, born out of my consideration of class demographics, made me a bit uncomfortable. Could it be that my first class, comprised of humanities students from a college with more stringent admittance criteria, was simply better prepared to be in a college writing course? And if such a claim was made, was this an analysis of innate ability or a question of socioeconomics that could only be sorted out by studying school districts and income levels? Were the students in my second class, who attended colleges rumored to have lower admittance standards, less prepared to be college students? These questions brought me to a disturbing place: if these demographics suggested that my students had highly varied levels of preparation, why were they all taking the same class, with the same reading, and the same questions? Had the placement system failed the kids who were sitting in my classroom uninterested and bored? And did any of this account for that chimerical reality I had deemed class personality?
 
"Could yellow paint and large windows make one group of students eager to participate and interested in knowing one another? Could carpeting really dissuade students from speaking in class?" Although considering such socioeconomic realities had seemed a good idea when trying to make sense of the difference in my classrooms, I found myself drifting farther and farther away from the students in question, and closer to critiques of the bureaucratic systems necessary for keeping a large university functioning. Interested in understanding the dynamic in my classrooms, I turned to what seemed another possible set of contributing factors: meeting times and locations.

My first class met at 2:50 in the afternoon, while my second class met at 8:10 on Monday mornings. This perhaps made my assessment of tardiness as an indication of attitude or personality unfair; even I found the 8:10 class a bit unnerving, and certainly unpleasant on Monday mornings. In addition, my first class met in a room painted in a lively and friendly yellow color, it had many windows which let in the afternoon sun, and it had no carpeting, which made the murmur of peer review echo, and made us all feel like we were at a social event or a creative workshop instead of a composition class.

My second class met in a much smaller, dark-colored room with tiny windows and thick carpeting. The dimensions of the room made sitting in a large circle impractical and made discussion groups difficult to organize and separate. The carpeting dulled the sound, rendering the murmur of peer review virtually inaudible and making the classroom feel like a stale library. Unlike the convivial and pleasant atmosphere my first class enjoyed, my second class gathered in a stuffy room that made class meetings seem dark and dull, and only emphasized the early-morning meeting time.

Could such details influence the tenor of a classroom? Could yellow paint and large windows make one group of students eager to participate and interested in knowing one another? Could carpeting really dissuade students from speaking in class?
The Power of Context . . . or not According to Malcolm Gladwell, in his book The Tipping Point, "ideas and products and messages and behaviors spread just like viruses do" (7). Gladwell claims that the spread of ideas or behaviors is dependent on several factors: the people who are capable of spreading ideas or behaviors; the attractiveness of the idea or behavior; and the atmosphere in which the idea or behavior is presented. Having already considered the importance of the people in each class, as well as how their very different backgrounds might have contributed to their behaviors in my classrooms, it seemed logical to analyze the classrooms themselves, and Gladwell's point about context forced me to give it more than a casual glance.

The color of the walls and the carpeting on the floor may well have helped shape the personalities of my classes: "the features of our immediate social and physical world-the streets we walk down, the people we encounter-play a huge role in shaping who we are and how we act. It isn't just serious criminal behavior, in the end, that is sensitive to environmental cues, it is all behavior" (168). According to Gladwell's model, all behaviors, not only the criminal behavior he analyzes in chapter four of his book can be changed by the smallest contextual stimulus.

Though it was nearing the end of the semester when Gladwell's book confirmed my early suspicions about the importance of the classrooms themselves, I immediately sought to alter the environment in my second class as an experiment. Changing classrooms was out of the question, so I made a point of arriving especially early to ensure that all of the blinds and drapes were open in the room. I rearranged furniture, pushing the many unneeded desks out of the way. The room looked a bit more spacious, and as it was a peer review day, I told my students not to fear being too loud.

These changes made no difference. Peer review was still sluggish, my students still seemingly unwilling to participate in the making of their own knowledge. While my students' papers in the second class proved that many of the students in the group were listening, working, and actively improving their essays, their level of participation in class just would not change; their demeanor remained somber and uninterested. I repeated my contextual improvements the following class as well, hoping that the quality of group discussion would prove susceptible to environmental influences, but the outcome was the same, and my students seemed to begrudge every minute of class time.

After examining the students in the classes, as well as the physical spaces in which the classes met, the only variable left to examine was myself. Ending my analysis where I probably should have started, I considered my own approach to the two groups. Perhaps I had shown some sort of unconscious preference for my first class. Perhaps the burden my second class placed on my work schedule was evident to my students. Perhaps my students perceived my personal dislike of the early morning meeting time and my own lack of energy. Although I had made an effort to avoid these pitfalls, perhaps my students could sense what I was not even aware I felt. Believing that a change in my classroom demeanor might help alter the dynamic of the room, I decided to dress casually during the last weeks of class, and I altered the discussion questions I gave my second class. Again, none of these small changes worked; no matter how I adjusted the material or myself, their personality remained fixed.
 
"A narrative that hopes to capture the events, interactions, processes and feelings experienced in a classroom must be a collaborative effort; it must take the form of a collage rather than a snapshot."

By the end of the semester I was convinced that the students in my second class really hadn't gotten over their first teacher's treatment of them, or that they simply didn't like me. I was also convinced that the students in my first class not only liked me, but they appreciated the goals of the course and appreciated one another. I happily assumed that my first class had formed a sort of community,2 a space in which they could all learn and make mistakes together. This notion of community presented itself as I watched the students in my class exchange phone numbers and make social plans for the weekends. I was disappointed this camaraderie did not exist in my second class. I believed they had been deprived of a truly rewarding experience, an experience my first class had seemed to enjoy and benefit from.

After I submitted final grades, I eagerly read my students' evaluations of me. What I found from my first class truly surprised me. Several of the students in the class claimed they had never understood the goals of the course, and one student said he or she believed my grading practices to be unfair. Another student claimed that I did not know how to connect with my students. The evaluations told a story contrary to the one I had been composing for months. The evaluations told a story of an unheard minority in the class, unhappy with their progress in the course and with my ability to help them. If within my first class a silent minority had existed, I couldn't imagine what my second class would say.

I read the evaluations from my second class, and to my amazement these evaluations did not indicate that my students had been unhappy. In fact, these evaluations told a story that contradicted all I had believed throughout the semester. Far from being unhappy with me or with the course, many of the students thanked me for my help, and explained that Expository Writing had helped them understand what writing on a college level meant. For a moment I believed my evaluations had been switched; the evaluations from my first class had expressed what I believed was felt in my second class, while my second class expressed what I believed my first class had felt.

The evaluations undermined the narrative I had been constructing all semester. The notion that my second class had expressed a bitter resentment for me as well as for the course through a surly personality simply wasn't true; the days of quiet group work had perhaps been the product of serious concentration rather than dislike. My first class, whose personality made me believe that all was harmonious, that all of my students felt included and understood the course's goals and requirements, had really fostered an angry minority, perhaps silenced by the overall feeling of congeniality in the classroom.

While I do not suggest that final evaluations can be read as unbiased accounts of truth (evaluations often record a student's frustration instead of a considered analysis of their instructor), they can capture in writing the students' perspectives, or a version of the truth about which teachers can normally only conjecture. I would have benefited from my students' perspectives earlier in the semester. If I had issued an informal mid-semester evaluation I might have better understood my second class's behavior and I might have found and helped the unhappy minority in my first class. It seems that any attempt to tell the story of teaching without simultaneously telling the story of learning is bound to be flawed; for the story of teaching must make room for the varied perceptions of both instructors and students.

"Intangible" indicators, such as a class's personality, can mislead a teacher about the experience of her students, making her account of the story of teaching necessarily flawed. Likewise, the story of teaching told only by a student would be flawed, for the student's perception of a teacher's personality or demeanor may be incomplete. A narrative that hopes to capture the events, interactions, processes and feelings experienced in a classroom must be a collaborative effort; it must take the form of a collage rather than a snapshot. Any story of teaching must also be a story of learning, told by both teacher and student alike.


1. I refer to my classes as "first class" and "second class" throughout this paper. This is not an indication of their progress through the course or of my preference for one group over the other. This distinction is chronological. I taught the "first class" before I was assigned to teach the "second class," and I use these terms only to facilitate discussion here.

2. I agree with Joseph Harris's claim that the word "community" is thrown about too often, and that it has come to represent a Utopian ideal that is impossible to replicate in the classroom but which is simultaneously dangerous to deny. I use this term here with necessary caution, and without attaching to it the wholly positive connotation the word has taken on. I envisioned my classroom as a community in so much as it provided a location for debate and disagreement amongst a group of people with ostensibly common goals. For more on this subject, see Joseph Harris's essay "The Idea of Community in the Study of Writing" in On Writing Research: The Braddock Essays 1975-1998. ed. Lisa Ede (Boston: 1999), pp. 260-271.


 



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